The Hallow Night Care
Written by Medina Azzahra Imanjaya
An adaptation from Roblox’s Break-in game.
Coming in the building
On a dark and stormy night, we got
lost on a school trip to the camping site. So, we packed and went into this
building. As all year 4 children and the year 4 teachers went into the building.
There was a stone-grey mist. We all coughed and sneezed because the mist went
up in our noses! When the mist disappeared, this lady said there is stuff
hidden around the house and said that we can call her Miss Hallow. When we did
find the stuff, we all showed what we found. I found £10, an apple, a biscuit,
and a soda.
Ordering a pizza
Then, we ordered pizza for the night and when it was time to go to bed,
Aarav, Pablo and Medina (Me) sneakily took one slice of pizza and quickly went
to bed. When we went upstairs, there were 3 bedrooms: a yellow one, a purple one
and a pink one. And Mr Smith taped a whiteboard and wrote: “Each colour was for
each class. The purple one was my class, the pink one was another class, and
the yellow
one was for another class”. So,
we went to the purple room.
The attack
At midnight, I heard a glass break and screaming and hitting. Then, I
woke up and random people are hurting us. So, I tried
to open the door, but it would not budge. It was locked! So, I ran and ran and
ran. I did get hurt but one of my friends brought a first aid kit and healed everyone.
In the morning, there was a portrait on the wall next to me and it
seems like it is gonna fall. And it did. And there was safe! (a safe is
basically where you store treasure).
Then, I got up and got ready for the day. Then, for breakfast we had
pancakes and we watched the news, and it said “This is not a drill! This is not
a drill! There are dangerous people attacking everyone and everywhere for money
and treasure. Stay safe and lock everything up such as doors and windows. The
leader is hideous Hallow”.
When the news ended, we all looked at Miss Hallow suspiciously. And
she said “listen. Hideous Hallow is not me. It is my mean sister Emila Hallow,
and I am moonlight Hallow”. Some people believed Miss Hallow, and some people
did not.
Then, Miss Hallow gave everyone wood planks and a picture of Ms Hallow’s
mean sister attacking everyone and everyone believed her so we covered every
window and door and hole, and then Lacie (my friend) found a broken window.
Then, we heard thumping, it sounded huge. We think there is a bad guy here. Then,
we hid everywhere. “go under the beds
(because there is a lot of beds in each room), and behind the doors. Then,
one boy named Vinnie went out of his hiding spot and decided to fight hideous
Hallow. “Vinnie! don’t do it! Hideous Hallow is a dangerous woman, the news
said, remember ?“ whispered Connor.
But Vinnie already went. It was very scary and I know how that feels.
Then, I heard Isla and Maisie making a plan, then we all heard and we all
decided to help. But, Hideous Hallow vanished, and Vinnie was hurt everywhere.
Luckily, one of my friends still brought the first aid kit downstairs and
healed Vinnie. “Well, that was a waste of time planning to help Vinnie”, moaned
Aarav.
“Well, that got late fast. Let’s order pizza” said Miss Hallow. “No, I
want a hamburger” shouted Lukas.
“Let’s do a vote”! said Medina (me).
“Yeah”! added Oakley.
Then 5 minutes later, pizza won the vote, so we ordered pizza.
10 minutes later, the pizza man arrived.
“Wait! That is not the pizza guy! It is hideous Hallow dressed up in a
pizza guy uniform”! said Jake.
So, people hid everywhere downstairs. Then, Hideous Hallow went upstairs, so we
quickly went into the basement. Luckily, the Miss Sajak locked the door. Then
we searched in the basement if there are any useful items in here. Miss Hallow
said, “There are weapons in the basement and a bunch of food and other stuff”.
In the blink of an eye, Alicia found a note, there were 4 numbers. It said “3740”.
“It could be for that safe “added Daniel.
But we had to stay for the night. Unfortunately, there were only 3
sleeping bags so we gave the people who needed the sleeping bags.
The last day
In the morning, we got up and went and get some supplies from the grocery
store. I bought a cookie and a first aid kit. When we all got home, Shae and
Amaya were making a pie we ate it and it was delicious. 1-hour later, there was
an alarm outside the house Amber, Leonor and a Freddie went outside to check
what was going on outside, it was Hideous Hallow! Luckily, uncle Pete offered us a ride. So, we
ran in uncle Pete’s car. As we drove, we saw Hideous Hallows Mansion .
“Woah it is Hideous Hallows Mansion !”.”
“Let's check it out !”
When I went in, I feed Hideous Hallows cat, then it loved me and it let me carry it. So, I
showed it to everyone then we decided to destroy everything for revenge. We did it very quickly until Hideous Hallow
came.
Then Hideous Hallow came so we escaped as quick as a flash then
Hideous Hallows cat scratched and hurt hideous Hallow “I will get you next
time”!! shouted Hideous hallow.
The end. #
The Hallow night care II is coming soon
